The wonder

Once there was a wonderful gardener and a mean friend the friend was called mallady and  the gardner's name is katrina."oh gardener " said mallady in a mean voice "yes" said katrina"make me a smoothie " " yes mame" said katrina she found a seed on the ground it said all dirty weed me, water me, feed me, she planted it then she said"I will do what you say"and she did. Then a big tree came she said make me a smoothie now now now . And it did but then mallady came and said "wHAT IS THAT " and she cut it down " nooo" said katrina .But then as she cried a beautiful light came and shon and the tree came back" but how "said katrina and the tree gave the smoothie and said "thank you".

Reflection. In writing I am learning to add detail to make my stories interesting. I am proud because I know lots of words. I need to improve on proofreading.