Reflection. In writing I am learning to add detail to make my stories interesting. I am proud because I know lots of words. I need to improve on proofreading.
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Monday, 30 May 2016
The wonder
Once there was a wonderful gardener and a mean friend the friend was called mallady and the gardner's name is katrina."oh gardener " said mallady in a mean voice "yes" said katrina"make me a smoothie " " yes mame" said katrina she found a seed on the ground it said all dirty weed me, water me, feed me, she planted it then she said"I will do what you say"and she did. Then a big tree came she said make me a smoothie now now now . And it did but then mallady came and said "wHAT IS THAT " and she cut it down " nooo" said katrina .But then as she cried a beautiful light came and shon and the tree came back" but how "said katrina and the tree gave the smoothie and said "thank you".
Thursday, 19 May 2016
Writing
In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting. I am proud because I know lots of words. I need to improve on proofreading
Monday, 16 May 2016
Tuesday, 10 May 2016
Reading
WALT Find and Summarise information in a non fiction text.
Write 1 sentence in your own words about the beginning of the story.
1.Tom wants a ferret from his friend amy.
Write 1 sentence in your own words about the middle of the story.
1.Mum said ferrets bite and it climbs up your leg.
Write 1 sentence in your own words about the end of the story.
1.Dad screms out ‘HELP’ Monty was in his leg.
Reflection: In reading I am learning to summarise the story in my own words. I feel proud because I can prove I am good. I need to improve on learning new words.
Monday, 9 May 2016
Maths
WALT add by splitting numbers into parts.
Reflection: i toke 2 away from the 7 and gave it to the 38 to make 40 so the 7 turned into a 5 then i toke tho 0 of the 40 and replaced it with a 5 to make 45 and i found out that it was easy.
Reflection: i toke 2 away from the 7 and gave it to the 38 to make 40 so the 7 turned into a 5 then i toke tho 0 of the 40 and replaced it with a 5 to make 45 and i found out that it was easy.
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