Monday, 30 May 2016

The wonder

Once there was a wonderful gardener and a mean friend the friend was called mallady and  the gardner's name is katrina."oh gardener " said mallady in a mean voice "yes" said katrina"make me a smoothie " " yes mame" said katrina she found a seed on the ground it said all dirty weed me, water me, feed me, she planted it then she said"I will do what you say"and she did. Then a big tree came she said make me a smoothie now now now . And it did but then mallady came and said "wHAT IS THAT " and she cut it down " nooo" said katrina .But then as she cried a beautiful light came and shon and the tree came back" but how "said katrina and the tree gave the smoothie and said "thank you".

Reflection. In writing I am learning to add detail to make my stories interesting. I am proud because I know lots of words. I need to improve on proofreading.

Thursday, 19 May 2016

Writing

In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting. I am proud because I know lots of words. I need to improve on proofreading

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

Reading



WALT Find and Summarise information in a non fiction text.


Write 1 sentence in your own words about the beginning of the story.
1.Tom wants a ferret from his friend amy.


Write 1 sentence in your own words about the middle of the story.
1.Mum said ferrets bite and it climbs up your leg.


Write 1 sentence in your own words about the end of the story.
1.Dad screms out ‘HELP’ Monty was in his leg.

Reflection: In reading I am learning to summarise the story in my own words. I feel proud because I can prove I am good. I need to improve on learning new words.

Monday, 9 May 2016

Maths

WALT add by splitting numbers into parts.
Reflection: i toke 2 away from the 7 and gave it to the 38 to make 40 so the 7 turned into a 5 then i toke tho 0 of the 40 and replaced it with a 5 to make 45 and i found out that it was easy.